Welcome to the Year Five website. On this website, we will be sharing examples of our children's work. This page is a workshop containing examples of learning in action. The work will not be the children's 'final draft’.
Most weeks, some classes take part in the 100 Word Challenge. Last week, for the second time this academic year, some of our children's writing was chosen for the Showcase. A link to the writing by Amelia B (5DCLM) can be found below.
Recently, we've been studying recounts. Some children have had a go at writing the recount of a day in the life of an inanimate object. They wrote them on their class blog. Click the links to read more. If you have time to leave a comment, they'd welcome that too!
The Life Of A Laptop by Nia
The lights flicked on and my mouth was opened. Someone was scratching my tongue! I decided to wake up so I opened my eyes and my mistress was sitting in front of me. She obviously wanted something but instead of saying “Good morning” she said “Finally you have turned on!” I thought that was a bit rude but I am a laptop so I can’t tell her of.She opened up Google Chrome and started to push down my teeth [this is how every day starts]! I realised that it was a Saturday so she shouldn’t give me that much stuff. Click here to continue reading...
I AM A BOOK BEING by Francesca
Dear Diary, In a big black box, yesterday, I moved into a brand new wooden white home. I wasn’t the only book moving in, there was lots of other me too! Click here to continue reading...
A Day In The Life Of Snow by James
Last Monday, it was snowing in the park. I hate it when it snows. I’m a snowflake and I really do not like it when I touch the ground. First, I get blown through the wind (not in control of what direction I am going). Click here to continue reading...
If you were completing this writing task, what object would you write about?