Haiku

This week, we've been writing some haiku. Take a look at the examples here. Do they follow the right pattern?

Ryan

The loud long cool noise

The storm sounds extremely loud

Extraordinary 

Alex

Peaceful sea big waves

Small boat with two children

Bright moon shining on the boat

Mia

The storm was gloomy,

The waves splashed against a rock,

And the noise was loud.

Ruby

The thunder was loud,

Big flashing lightning was bright,

Huge waves are crashing.

Grace

Huge waves dancing fast

Loud sea swallowing the bout

Huge sea glistening

Luke

The blue crashing waves,   

Climbing over the small boat,

In the scary sea.